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    "step": "grammar_correction",
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            "errorCode": "0",
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                "rawEssay": "\nThe two maps compare changes in the layout of a specific university campus in 1975, 2002 and 2020.\n\nIn 1975, four main areas could be noticed in each corner of the university with several trees between them.\n\nIn the north-western corner a sports center was situated, surrounded by a road which intersected another road leading to a lecture room in the south-eastern part. A library lay in the south-western end and to its opposite side, there was a drama room and a music room boarding a big car park.\n\nIn 2002, one striking change was that the sports center had been removed and an indoor one is planned for 2020. Also the road running across the campus was demolished in order to make way for a science building in the center. But another new road will be build to connect the indoor sports center with the former library which had been divided into two so that half part served as an IT room. While the lecture room had become twice as large as it was in 1975, the original drama room was turned into a geology room, the place before which was gained by the car park, so its capacity was enlarged.\n\nIn summary, great changes had occurred as this university had more constructions over these years.",
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                "sentNum": 9,
                "stLevelCode": 9,
                "uniqueKey": "f6887b68-25bf-4e42-811d-0bd425900407",
                "essayAdvice": "写作能力超过了大部分雅思考生,接下来要多积累词汇、丰富文章内容。棒极了!",
                "title": "",
                "totalScore": 7.0,
                "writeType": 1,
                "essayLangName": "English",
                "majorScore": {
                    "grammarAdvice": "能够使用简单句和一些复杂句,但是复杂句会有语法错误,标点符号也会用错。继续加油呀!",
                    "wordScore": 77.8,
                    "grammarScore": 78.1,
                    "topicScore": 60.3,
                    "emphasis": 2,
                    "wordAdvice": "能够掌握很多高阶词汇,虽然偶尔会有单词拼写或选词不当的错误,但不影响理解。太棒啦!",
                    "structureScore": 76.9,
                    "structureAdvice": "能够连贯地组织观点,有效使用衔接手段,但句内、句间和段落间的逻辑关系待明确。还需要继续努力哟~"
                },
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                    "neuralScore": 0.0,
                    "conjunction": 9.0,
                    "grammar": 6.1,
                    "spelling": 10.0,
                    "advanceVocab": 1.0,
                    "wordNum": 7.0,
                    "topic": 0.0,
                    "lexicalSubs": 0.0,
                    "wordDiversity": 8.1,
                    "sentComplex": 9.1,
                    "structure": 7.7
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                            "sentId": 0,
                            "errorPosInfos": [],
                            "sentFeedback": "",
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                            "rawSegSent": "the two maps compare changes in the layout of a specific university campus in 1975 , 2002 and 2020 .",
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                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
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                            "paraId": 1,
                            "sentId": 1,
                            "errorPosInfos": [],
                            "sentFeedback": "",
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                            "rawSegSent": "in 1975 , four main areas could be noticed in each corner of the university with several trees between them .",
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                            "isContainTypoError": false,
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                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
                        {
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                            "sentId": 2,
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                                {
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                                    "reason": "标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "corner ",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "不符合英文的标点格式规范,建议插入【,】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "标点符号缺失",
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                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "不符合英文的标点格式规范",
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                                    "endPos": 28,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Insert:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "09000",
                                    "cvalidChunk": ",",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159068,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "补全标点",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "格式",
                                    "correctChunk": "corner, "
                                }
                            ],
                            "sentFeedback": "标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
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                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
                        {
                            "rawSent": "A library lay in the south-western end and to its opposite side, there was a drama room and a music room boarding a big car park.",
                            "paraId": 2,
                            "sentId": 3,
                            "errorPosInfos": [
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "knowledgeExp": "介词的正确使用需要要考虑固定搭配中包含的名词、代词和其他词类、短语或者从句,符合固定搭配的表达 习惯。",
                                    "reason": "固定搭配介词错误,建议将〖to〗修改为【on】",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "to",
                                    "exampleCases": [
                                        {
                                            "right": "That is the fundamental difference between the two societies.",
                                            "error": "That is the fundamental difference on the two societies.",
                                            "rightTranslate": "这就是这两个社会之间的本质区别。"
                                        }
                                    ],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "固定搭配中的介词是有特殊含义的,建议将【to】修改为【on】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "固定搭配介词错误",
                                    "type": "grammar_v1",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "固定搭配中的介词是有特殊含义的",
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                                    "endPos": 45,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Replace:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "04200",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159070,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "修改介词",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "词法",
                                    "correctChunk": "on"
                                },
                                {
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                                    "reason": "词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "big",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "词汇使用频繁,建议替换新单词",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "词汇频繁使用",
                                    "type": "synonym",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "词汇使用频繁",
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                                    "endPos": 119,
                                    "target": [
                                        "huge",
                                        "large",
                                        "long"
                                    ],
                                    "structType": 3,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "suggest",
                                    "errorTypeId": "32000",
                                    "showType": 2,
                                    "id": 1727803159069,
                                    "vip": true,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "替换新单词",
                                    "correctChunk": "big"
                                }
                            ],
                            "sentFeedback": "固定搭配介词错误,建议将〖to〗修改为【on】;词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词",
                            "sentStartPos": 373,
                            "correctedSent": "A library lay in the south-western end and on its opposite side, there was a drama room and a music room boarding a big car park.",
                            "rawSegSent": "a library lay in the south-western end and to its opposite side , there was a drama room and a music room boarding a big car park .",
                            "isContainGrammarError": true,
                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
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                            "rawSent": "In 2002, one striking change was that the sports center had been removed and an indoor one is planned for 2020.",
                            "paraId": 3,
                            "sentId": 4,
                            "errorPosInfos": [
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "reason": "词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "change",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "词汇使用频繁,建议替换新单词",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "词汇频繁使用",
                                    "type": "synonym",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "词汇使用频繁",
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                                    "endPos": 28,
                                    "target": [
                                        "shift"
                                    ],
                                    "structType": 3,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "suggest",
                                    "errorTypeId": "32000",
                                    "showType": 2,
                                    "id": 1727803159071,
                                    "vip": true,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "替换新单词",
                                    "correctChunk": "change"
                                }
                            ],
                            "sentFeedback": "词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词",
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                            "correctedSent": "In 2002, one striking change was that the sports center had been removed and an indoor one is planned for 2020.",
                            "rawSegSent": "in 2002 , one striking change was that the sports center had been removed and an indoor one is planned for 2020 .",
                            "isContainGrammarError": false,
                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
                        {
                            "rawSent": "Also the road running across the campus was demolished in order to make way for a science building in the center.",
                            "paraId": 3,
                            "sentId": 5,
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                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "reason": "标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "Also ",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "不符合英文的标点格式规范,建议插入【,】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "标点符号缺失",
                                    "type": "grammar_v1",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "不符合英文的标点格式规范",
                                    "startPos": 0,
                                    "endPos": 5,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Insert:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "09000",
                                    "cvalidChunk": ",",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159072,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "补全标点",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "格式",
                                    "correctChunk": "Also, "
                                }
                            ],
                            "sentFeedback": "标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
                            "sentStartPos": 616,
                            "correctedSent": "Also, the road running across the campus was demolished in order to make way for a science building in the center.",
                            "rawSegSent": "also the road running across the campus was demolished in order to make way for a science building in the center .",
                            "isContainGrammarError": true,
                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
                        {
                            "rawSent": "But another new road will be build to connect the indoor sports center with the former library which had been divided into two so that half part served as an IT room.",
                            "paraId": 3,
                            "sentId": 6,
                            "errorPosInfos": [
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "reason": "词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "new",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "词汇使用频繁,建议替换新单词",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "词汇频繁使用",
                                    "type": "synonym",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "词汇使用频繁",
                                    "startPos": 12,
                                    "endPos": 15,
                                    "target": [
                                        "modern",
                                        "current"
                                    ],
                                    "structType": 3,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "suggest",
                                    "errorTypeId": "32000",
                                    "showType": 2,
                                    "id": 1727803159073,
                                    "vip": true,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "替换新单词",
                                    "correctChunk": "new"
                                },
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "knowledgeExp": "被动语态由“be动词+及物动词的过去分词”构成,其中,过去分词由动词原形变化而来。",
                                    "reason": "动词形式错误,建议将〖build〗修改为【built】",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "build",
                                    "exampleCases": [
                                        {
                                            "right": "Rescue is urgently needed.",
                                            "error": "Rescue is urgently need.",
                                            "rightTranslate": "急需救援。"
                                        },
                                        {
                                            "right": "This topic has been discussed recently.",
                                            "error": "This topic has been discuss recently.",
                                            "rightTranslate": "最近这个话题被热议。"
                                        }
                                    ],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "被动语态的系动词后面要接过去分词,建议将【build】修改为【built】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "动词形式错误",
                                    "type": "grammar_v1",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "被动语态的系动词后面要接过去分词",
                                    "startPos": 29,
                                    "endPos": 34,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Replace:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "07213",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159076,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "修改系动词后的动词形式,使用动词的过去分词形式",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "句法",
                                    "correctChunk": "built"
                                },
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "reason": "标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "library ",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "不符合英文的标点格式规范,建议插入【,】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "标点符号缺失",
                                    "type": "grammar_v1",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "不符合英文的标点格式规范",
                                    "startPos": 87,
                                    "endPos": 95,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Insert:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "09000",
                                    "cvalidChunk": ",",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159074,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "补全标点",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "格式",
                                    "correctChunk": "library, "
                                },
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "reason": "标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "two ",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "不符合英文的标点格式规范,建议插入【,】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "标点符号缺失",
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                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "不符合英文的标点格式规范",
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                                    "endPos": 127,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Insert:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "09000",
                                    "cvalidChunk": ",",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159075,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "补全标点",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "格式",
                                    "correctChunk": "two, "
                                }
                            ],
                            "sentFeedback": "词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词;动词形式错误,建议将〖build〗修改为【built】;标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗;标点符号缺失,建议插入〖,〗",
                            "sentStartPos": 730,
                            "correctedSent": "But another new road will be built to connect the indoor sports center with the former library, which had been divided into two, so that half part served as an IT room.",
                            "rawSegSent": "but another new road will be build to connect the indoor sports center with the former library which had been divided into two so that half part served as an it room .",
                            "isContainGrammarError": true,
                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
                        {
                            "rawSent": "While the lecture room had become twice as large as it was in 1975, the original drama room was turned into a geology room, the place before which was gained by the car park, so its capacity was enlarged.",
                            "paraId": 3,
                            "sentId": 7,
                            "errorPosInfos": [
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "knowledgeExp": "实义动词意为“有实在意义的动词”,以下三类是常见的用法:\n1. 及物动词:如kiss、enjoy等;\n2. 不及物动词:如sleep、fly等;\n3. 兼做及物和不及物的动词:如move、count等。",
                                    "reason": "实义动词使用错误,建议将〖gained〗修改为【built】",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "gained",
                                    "exampleCases": [
                                        {
                                            "right": "We can catch the early morning train.",
                                            "error": "We can run the early morning train.",
                                            "rightTranslate": "我们可以赶上早晨的火车。"
                                        }
                                    ],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "要参考具体的分类使用实义动词,建议将【gained】修改为【built】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "实义动词使用错误",
                                    "type": "grammar_v1",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "要参考具体的分类使用实义动词",
                                    "startPos": 151,
                                    "endPos": 157,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Replace:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "07251",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159077,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "修改实义动词",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "句法",
                                    "correctChunk": "built"
                                }
                            ],
                            "sentFeedback": "实义动词使用错误,建议将〖gained〗修改为【built】",
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                            "correctedSent": "While the lecture room had become twice as large as it was in 1975, the original drama room was turned into a geology room, the place before which was built by the car park, so its capacity was enlarged.",
                            "rawSegSent": "while the lecture room had become twice as large as it was in 1975 , the original drama room was turned into a geology room , the place before which was gained by the car park , so its capacity was enlarged .",
                            "isContainGrammarError": true,
                            "isContainTypoError": false,
                            "sentScore": 100.0,
                            "isValidLangSent": true
                        },
                        {
                            "rawSent": "In summary, great changes had occurred as this university had more constructions over these years.",
                            "paraId": 4,
                            "sentId": 8,
                            "errorPosInfos": [
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "knowledgeExp": "现在完成时表示过去发生的动作一直持续到现在,并有可能继续延续;过去完成时表示动作发生的时间是“过去的过去”,侧重事情的结果。",
                                    "reason": "动词时态错误,建议将〖had〗修改为【have】",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "had",
                                    "exampleCases": [
                                        {
                                            "right": "I have written three novels since 1997.",
                                            "error": "I had written three novels since 1997.",
                                            "rightTranslate": "从1997年以来,我已经写了三本小说。"
                                        },
                                        {
                                            "right": "She hasn't left home for several days.",
                                            "error": "She hadn't left home for several days.",
                                            "rightTranslate": "她已经好几天没有离开家了。"
                                        }
                                    ],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "用现在完成时表示过去的动作对现在的影响和迄今发生的事,建议将【had】修改为【have】",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "动词时态错误",
                                    "type": "grammar_v1",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "用现在完成时表示过去的动作对现在的影响和迄今发生的事",
                                    "startPos": 26,
                                    "endPos": 29,
                                    "structType": 2,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "`Replace:Default`",
                                    "errorTypeId": "07238",
                                    "showType": 1,
                                    "id": 1727803159079,
                                    "vip": false,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "修改动词时态为现在完成时",
                                    "errToBBasicType": "句法",
                                    "correctChunk": "have"
                                },
                                {
                                    "newSubErrorType": 1,
                                    "reason": "词汇频繁使用,建议替换新单词",
                                    "isValidLangChunk": true,
                                    "orgChunk": "more",
                                    "exampleCases": [],
                                    "errBaseInfo": "词汇使用频繁,建议替换新单词",
                                    "newErrorType": 20,
                                    "errorTypeTitle": "词汇频繁使用",
                                    "type": "synonym",
                                    "nodeType": 1,
                                    "detailReason": "词汇使用频繁",
                                    "startPos": 62,
                                    "endPos": 66,
                                    "target": [
                                        "additional",
                                        "further"
                                    ],
                                    "structType": 3,
                                    "errorTypeCode": "suggest",
                                    "errorTypeId": "32000",
                                    "showType": 2,
                                    "id": 1727803159078,
                                    "vip": true,
                                    "cardSubtitle": "替换新单词",
                                    "correctChunk": "more"
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