表达润色

来自表达润色JSON
提取字段是 data/enhancement

数据

json

{
    "enhancement": [
        {
            "para": 1,
            "input": "No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.",
            "segment": [
                {
                    "text": "No significant gender differences",
                    "emoji": "👍",
                    "comment": "很好，抓住了关键点。可以考虑用更高级的表达，比如'No notable gender disparities'。",
                    "replacement": "No notable gender disparities"
                },
                {
                    "text": "can be seen",
                    "emoji": "🖊️",
                    "comment": "被动语态（'can be seen'）不够直接；为了更有权威性，建议用主动语态，比如'are evident'。",
                    "replacement": "are evident"
                },
                {
                    "text": "the Indian population chart",
                    "emoji": "🖊️",
                    "comment": "可以更具体一些，比如'the population pyramid for India'。",
                    "replacement": "the population pyramid for India"
                }
            ],
            "output": "No notable gender disparities are evident on the population pyramid for India."
        },
        {
            "para": 1,
            "input": "The age structure shows a young population with many children under 15.",
            "segment": [
                {
                    "text": "age structure",
                    "emoji": "🖊️",
                    "comment": "虽然正确，但在人口统计分析中，'population pyramid'是更精确的术语。",
                    "replacement": "population pyramid"
                },
                {
                    "text": "young population",
                    "emoji": "👍",
                    "comment": "很好，使用了人口统计术语来描述人口构成。",
                    "replacement": "young population"
                },
                {
                    "text": "children under 15",
                    "emoji": "🖊️",
                    "comment": "可以更具体一些，比如'youth population aged 0-14'。",
                    "replacement": "youth population aged 0-14"
                }
            ],
            "output": "The population pyramid shows a young population with a large youth population aged 0-14."
        }
    ]
}

JSON 数据字段解释:

该 JSON 数据表示一组经过润色的句子，以提高其清晰度和准确性。

feedback_input: 数组，其中每个对象对应一个段落，包含以下字段:
- para: 段落编号。
- input: 润色前的原始句子。
- output: 应用建议后的润色句子。
- segment: 一个对象数组，每个对象表示被审查的句子片段。
  - text: 被审查的具体文本片段。
  - emoji: 表示反馈类型的表情符号（例如，👍 表示正面反馈，🖊️ 表示建议）。
  - comment: 解释反馈或建议的评论。
  - replacement: 对该片段的建议替换文本（如果适用）。