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const feedback_input = [
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        "input": "No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.",
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                "text": "No significant gender differences",
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                "comment": "很好,抓住了关键点。可以考虑用更高级的表达,比如'No notable gender disparities'。",
                "replacement": "No notable gender disparities"
            },
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                "text": "can be seen",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "被动语态('can be seen')不够直接;为了更有权威性,建议用主动语态,比如'are evident'。",
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                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'the population pyramid for India'。",
                "replacement": "the population pyramid for India"
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        "output": "No notable gender disparities are evident on the population pyramid for India."
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        "para": 1,
        "input": "The age structure shows a young population with many children under 15.",
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                "text": "age structure",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "虽然正确,但在人口统计分析中,'population pyramid'是更精确的术语。",
                "replacement": "population pyramid"
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                "text": "young population",
                "emoji": "👍",
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                "replacement": "young population"
            },
            {
                "text": "children under 15",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'youth population aged 0-14'。",
                "replacement": "youth population aged 0-14"
            }
        ],
        "output": "The population pyramid shows a young population with a large youth population aged 0-14."
    },
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        "input": "Life expectancy has gone up over the past decades.",
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                "text": "has gone up",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更正式的语言,比如'has increased'或'has improved'。",
                "replacement": "has increased significantly"
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            {
                "text": "over the past decades",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "为了更精确,建议使用具体的时间段。",
                "replacement": "over the past five decades"
            }
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        "output": "Life expectancy has increased significantly over the past five decades."
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        "para": 1,
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                "text": "The data shows that",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "避免以'The data shows'开头。可以更直接地表达,比如'According to the demographic trends'。",
                "replacement": "According to the demographic trends"
            },
            {
                "text": "birth rates are falling",
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            {
                "text": "in most regions",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'across developed regions'。",
                "replacement": "across developed regions"
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                "text": "elderly population",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "使用更精确的术语,比如'aged population (65+)'。",
                "replacement": "aged population (65+)"
            },
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                "text": "growing fast",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更学术的语言,比如'increasing rapidly'或'expanding significantly'。",
                "replacement": "increasing rapidly"
            }
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        "output": "The aged population (65+) is increasing rapidly in Japan."
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                "text": "big effects",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更学术的语言,比如'significant impact'或'substantial influence'。",
                "replacement": "significant impact"
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                "text": "population change",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "使用更具体的术语,比如'demographic composition'。",
                "replacement": "demographic composition"
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                "text": "No significant gender differences",
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                "comment": "很好,抓住了关键点。可以考虑用更高级的表达,比如'No notable gender disparities'。",
                "replacement": "No notable gender disparities"
            },
            {
                "text": "can be seen",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "被动语态('can be seen')不够直接;为了更有权威性,建议用主动语态,比如'are evident'。",
                "replacement": "are evident"
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                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'the population pyramid for India'。",
                "replacement": "the population pyramid for India"
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        "para": 2,
        "input": "The age structure shows a young population with many children under 15.",
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            {
                "text": "age structure",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "虽然正确,但在人口统计分析中,'population pyramid'是更精确的术语。",
                "replacement": "population pyramid"
            },
            {
                "text": "young population",
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            {
                "text": "children under 15",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'youth population aged 0-14'。",
                "replacement": "youth population aged 0-14"
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                "text": "has gone up",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
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                "text": "over the past decades",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "为了更精确,建议使用具体的时间段。",
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            }
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        "output": "Life expectancy has increased significantly over the past five decades."
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        "input": "The data shows that birth rates are falling in most regions.",
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                "text": "The data shows that",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "避免以'The data shows'开头。可以更直接地表达,比如'According to the demographic trends'。",
                "replacement": "According to the demographic trends"
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            {
                "text": "birth rates are falling",
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                "text": "in most regions",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'across developed regions'。",
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            }
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        "output": "According to the demographic trends, birth rates are declining across developed regions."
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                "text": "elderly population",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "使用更精确的术语,比如'aged population (65+)'。",
                "replacement": "aged population (65+)"
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                "text": "growing fast",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更学术的语言,比如'increasing rapidly'或'expanding significantly'。",
                "replacement": "increasing rapidly"
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        "output": "The aged population (65+) is increasing rapidly in Japan."
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        "para": 2,
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                "text": "big effects",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更学术的语言,比如'significant impact'或'substantial influence'。",
                "replacement": "significant impact"
            },
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                "text": "population change",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "使用更具体的术语,比如'demographic composition'。",
                "replacement": "demographic composition"
            }
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        "output": "Migration has significant impact on demographic composition."
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        "para": 3,
        "input": "No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.",
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            {
                "text": "No significant gender differences",
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                "replacement": "No notable gender disparities"
            },
            {
                "text": "can be seen",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "被动语态('can be seen')不够直接;为了更有权威性,建议用主动语态,比如'are evident'。",
                "replacement": "are evident"
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                "text": "the Indian population chart",
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                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'the population pyramid for India'。",
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            {
                "text": "age structure",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "虽然正确,但在人口统计分析中,'population pyramid'是更精确的术语。",
                "replacement": "population pyramid"
            },
            {
                "text": "young population",
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                "replacement": "young population"
            },
            {
                "text": "children under 15",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'youth population aged 0-14'。",
                "replacement": "youth population aged 0-14"
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        ],
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    },
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        "para": 5,
        "input": "Life expectancy has gone up over the past decades.",
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            {
                "text": "has gone up",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
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            },
            {
                "text": "over the past decades",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "为了更精确,建议使用具体的时间段。",
                "replacement": "over the past five decades"
            }
        ],
        "output": "Life expectancy has increased significantly over the past five decades."
    },
    {
        "para": 6,
        "input": "The data shows that birth rates are falling in most regions.",
        "segment": [
            {
                "text": "The data shows that",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "避免以'The data shows'开头。可以更直接地表达,比如'According to the demographic trends'。",
                "replacement": "According to the demographic trends"
            },
            {
                "text": "birth rates are falling",
                "emoji": "👍",
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                "replacement": "birth rates are declining"
            },
            {
                "text": "in most regions",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "可以更具体一些,比如'across developed regions'。",
                "replacement": "across developed regions"
            }
        ],
        "output": "According to the demographic trends, birth rates are declining across developed regions."
    },
    {
        "para": 7,
        "input": "The elderly population is growing fast in Japan.",
        "segment": [
            {
                "text": "elderly population",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "使用更精确的术语,比如'aged population (65+)'。",
                "replacement": "aged population (65+)"
            },
            {
                "text": "growing fast",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更学术的语言,比如'increasing rapidly'或'expanding significantly'。",
                "replacement": "increasing rapidly"
            }
        ],
        "output": "The aged population (65+) is increasing rapidly in Japan."
    },
    {
        "para": 8,
        "input": "Migration has big effects on population change.",
        "segment": [
            {
                "text": "big effects",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "用更学术的语言,比如'significant impact'或'substantial influence'。",
                "replacement": "significant impact"
            },
            {
                "text": "population change",
                "emoji": "🖊️",
                "comment": "使用更具体的术语,比如'demographic composition'。",
                "replacement": "demographic composition"
            }
        ],
        "output": "Migration has significant impact on demographic composition."
    }
];

JSON 数据字段解释:

该 JSON 数据表示一组经过润色的句子,以提高其清晰度和准确性。

  • feedback_input: 数组,其中每个对象对应一个段落,包含以下字段:
    • para: 段落编号。
    • input: 润色前的原始句子。
    • output: 应用建议后的润色句子。
    • segment: 一个对象数组,每个对象表示被审查的句子片段。
      • text: 被审查的具体文本片段。
      • emoji: 表示反馈类型的表情符号(例如,👍 表示正面反馈,🖊️ 表示建议)。
      • comment: 解释反馈或建议的评论。
      • replacement: 对该片段的建议替换文本(如果适用)。

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  1. 切换下半部分页面为diff模块

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  1. 点击右上方按钮后关闭diff的删除部分

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  1. 点击文本片段后弹出反馈框, 再次点击后收回; 点击表格中的对应内容也会由同样的效果. 如果是👍, 反馈框为绿色; 否则为反馈框为蓝色.

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